2014高考开云（中国）作文训练：租房

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　　Passage 1: 邮件一：(3-8)租房

　　一家英国网站专门为外国留学生提供住宿家庭的信息，假如你是李华，打算明年夏天去英国留学，因此你给他们发一封电子邮件，说明你的租房要求;

　　1.提供单独的房间2.房子的地点3.免费提供生活用品(洗衣机等)4.每月房租请根据以上内容写一篇100词左右的电子邮件，开头和结尾已经给出，不计开云官方网页版总词数，可适当增加细节。

　　参考词汇：住宿家庭host family

　　Dear Sir or Madam,

　　I am going to study in the UK next year.

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　　Sincerely yours,

　　Li Hua

　　范文：

　　Dear Sir of Madam,

　　I am going to study in the UK next summer. I learn from your website that you can provide accommodation information for overseas students, so I am writing to look for a host family. Here are my requirements.

　　First, I’d like to have my own room, which is comfortable for me to stay in. Second, the flat should not be far away from the center of the city, where it is convenient for me to go around. Third, I’d appreciate it if the host family can provide a washing machine and some cookers for free so that I can wash my clothes and cook my meals. Besides, the monthly rent should be no more than 100 pounds.

　　Looking forward to your early reply.

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Hua